You're missing a comma and a word, on the first page of chapter one.
If your friends don't tell you....
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Sorry. "Arty always HAD this issue.."
Yeah, about that typo. I guess the first 4 pages look like crap anyway. Don't worry, whenever I get the chance to publish my comic book line (and serve this as an "issue #0", which I recently thought would be smart), I'll remake the first 4 pages.
(Man, do I have egg on my face.)
VicariousE
Any links to the previous chapters? Glad you're on course, and your end of year schedule will (should) allow for a well earned break from the action!
GrimJimmy
Thanks for reminding me. To save people the trouble, I'll send links to the first two chapters on Google+ right now.